Don’t Fall in Love

Don’t fall in love, ay only losers fall,
Rise in love, and stand in it tall,
The heart, a storm in it, govern,
The rain, a noise in it, listen.
Walk on the roads that lead you to her soul’s towers,
And make her the colors of your flowers.
Touch the raindrops, and merge with its soul,
Travel over the clouds, push out of the hole,
The hole of grief where you reside,
Leave it in her hand, and let life slide.
The fog, the mist, the blossoming bud,
She the eternal princess, my heart, a thud.
Smell of the soil in the rains of the monsoon,
A blessing of God, arrived on earth too soon,
Yet don’t fall in love, ay only losers fall,
Rise in love, and stand in it tall.
The dew on flowers, wet as my eyes,
After it realized that all were lies,
Lies that life is a rose-bed to sleep on,
When it was pricked by each and every thorn.
Abandoned is the village, the village of love,
Died has today, each and every dove,
Each and every emotion that I had carried till today,
Has burnt out to ashes by the light of the day,
Yet I’ll not fall in love, ay only losers fall,
And I won’t rise in it, my life’s to a halt.

16 thoughts on “Don’t Fall in Love

  1. wow, it’s so beautiful. To the master of poetry ❀ you have no idea how fluent you are in the realm of language and intuition.


    1. Thanks for bookmarking my blog. πŸ™‚ And I would be pleased if you do not put sites and etc for advertisements in your comments because that makes your comment to be identified as a spam. Thank you.


  2. Woah, didn’t know you’d be Googling it up ^_^ I just thought that it might be a villanelle because of the repeating line “Don’t fall in love, ay only losers fall.” It’s been a long time since my English class covered poems. You’re welcome, anyway! I’m happy to help. πŸ˜€


    1. Firstly, I just googled up to find out what a villanelle actually is. πŸ˜› Technically, A villanelle has only two rhyme sounds. The first and third lines of the first stanza are rhyming refrains that alternate as the third line in each successive stanza and form a couplet at the close. A villanelle is nineteen lines long, consisting of five tercets and one concluding quatrain. Because of its non-linear structure, the villanelle resists narrative development.

      Haha, I don’t find the verse even close to this. πŸ˜› Nevertheless, thanks a lot for visiting my site, spending time reading the verses, and giving me your valuable feedback. πŸ™‚ Hope to see you more here. πŸ™‚


    1. Hey thank you. πŸ™‚ Hope you see you more here. πŸ™‚ And in the meanwhile I’ll visit you. πŸ™‚


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